Today,lack of the zoos are one of the biggest problem in our country.Because according to government animals aren't important for them,political issues are more important for than animals but it is really wrong thoughts.Although some people are against having zoos, i believe there should be a zoo in every city because of three reasons.
The first reason is security.Thanks to the zoos,animals live sofely.For example,zoos protect them from hard-weather condition and people's mis behaved.etc..
Second one is nutrition and health.Animals in the zoo can feed in a healthy a way.So,they don't become extinct and they can breed.
Thirdly,thanks to zoos,people can recognize the animals and they can see almost every species.They can also see different species which is seen in documentary.Therefore,people get more information about animals.
To sum up,as you see,i support to keep animals in zoos.Because animals are the part of our life so we have to protect them whatever it happens.
Yes Oğuz, you are right, it's a good essay:)
YanıtlaSilyour organisation is successful.
however, your paragraphs are a little bit short, so you can write more. your content should be richer. for example, you can give examples, talk about statistics etc.
I didn't see so many grammatical problems.
generallt, iy's successful.
thank you so much my teacher who is the most beatiful teacher in our school :P
YanıtlaSilı agree with you diloşş yelde yelmer is the most beautiful teacher in our school :)
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