Today,lots people prefer living in a big city but i don't think in this way.In my opinion,living in a village is better than living in a bigcity because of transportation,neighborhood and fresh food.
First of all,transportation is one of the biggest problem in our country especially in big cities but if you live in a village,you haven't got any problem about transportation because not many people live in village,most of them has been migrating to big city for a long years therefore in village there are not much transportation problems.
Second advantage is neighborhood.People who live in a bigcity don't even know their neighbor's name because they live in a apartment so they can't even come across each other but if you live in a small village you probably know most of the neighbors and they usually are friendly and helpful.In short,communication between people is strong to people living in a village.
Thirdly,living in a village is really advantageous for fresh foods.You can consume your own food.It mustbe really enjoyable and healthy so thanks to their food maybe you can live longer.
As a result,as you see living in a village is really good in every viewpoint and if i had chance to determine where i live, i'd definetely choose village.
Essay was short but it impressive.Also you should develop your idea..maybe..
YanıtlaSilthanks özgür :D
YanıtlaSilI agree with Ozgur, its a little bit short.
YanıtlaSilyour introduction is not well developed. you mention your idea in your first sentence, but yo should talk about what you think, only in your thesis, not before.
your topics are really good: transportation,neighborhood and fresh food
try to make your body paragraphs richer, give more major supporting sentences, more examples, quotations etc.
in your second body, you can talk about how people behave each other in the city and in the village (in terms of communication, trust, help etc.)
for example, in your third body, you only mention village while talking about fresh food. what about city? how is the situation in big city?
your conclusion is short, I think its better if you start your conclusion with a general statement like: living in a city and village differ from each other in some aspects.
however, I like your comment in the end.